Hey junta here is my attempt at writing some stories..i took a lot of inspiration from things that happened to ppl i know here..so here it goes..
cheers
jeenu
Janvi started thinking about the first time she met Nilay. It was through Subha her roommate. Subha had joined the Graduate program at UVA that fall and Nilay was her mentor. She can still remember to the exact detail how it happened..It was in the evening Janvi was lying down on her couch with the quilt over her. She realised she had the seasonal flu and was cursing herself for not taking the Flu shot..when there was knock on the door. Janvi was not expecting anyone so she was wondering who it was and she went to open the door and Subha bustled in "hey sorry i forgot to take my keys with me " janvi sighed well Subha always seems to lose the key ya forget to take it ..anyways that was when she noticed this desi guy still standing outside the apartment holding the door and janvi got annoyed she was wearing her sick jammies and she was not dressed to meet company..Subha did not seem to notice her discomfort and annoyance and said "hey J this is nilay , he is my mentor" janvi mumbled a Hi and then started walking to her room..when He asked her " hey are u a new student too ??" Janvi was not in any mood to talk so she said " No" and walked in to her and closed the door.
"hey Nilay do come in to the house yaar..let me make u some chai" and Subha walked in to the kitchen "never said no to free chai..thanks" Nilay walked in to the living room and started looking around..and he whistled "nice pad yaar"Subha beamed and then said " its all janvi's..she had been here for an year u know"
Nilay "no way..i know almost of all the desis in this place and i have never seen her around.." " so who did she room in with last year..""Divya..i think from comp science..she graduated this fall.."
"oh i know her.." Subha looked at him and asked " so Mr know all the desis here..how did u miss knowing my roomie then..Huh..??" Nilay laughed " may be becos she is so kadoos "..Subha giggled but then said in a sober tone " she is not all that bad..just anal about things.."
Nilay then walked up to DVD's lying on tea table and whistled and said " If i were u i will lock my room at night before i sleep.." Subha looked at him seriously and asked "why??"..well look at her DVD collection he showed her " the hannibal " and "blair witch -2" " i dont think these are urs??"
Subha replied earnestly " well iam not in to these hollywood flicks.." Nilay laughed and said " seems like u r roommate is and u know wat they say people who watch violent movies will soon develope a taste for violence themselves..."
" Nilay u are now making me nervous yaar.." Subha whined..Nilay then laughed and said " silly i was just teasing u..anyways do u wanna go and watch a movie..i promise u it is not violent.. Abhay will be there..."
"well what do i care if abhay was there or not. ..and if u keep teasing me like this tea is gonna be on ur head and not on the cup..."
"bapp re aaj kal ki ladikiyan itne violent kyun hai..??? ok ma'am i will not tease u anymore for the day ok.." Nilay smiled .
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18 comments:
Aaahaa...story from Jeenu :)
What a treat! I love to read people's initial works...gives an insight about them ;)
(Jeenu don't let that scare you!)
Nice narration...I am already in love with Nilay...unique name I must add! In fact all the names are cool!
vi
thanks Vi
i was inspired to write one based on ur vishal stories :)
def would like to improve with expert story writers like u and flower :D
Nilay is the name of one of my good friends son :) i loved it the first time i heard it..well "nilay" in real life is also an awesome dude
cheers
jeenu
Hey Jeens!
I am puzzled..confushed:(
IS a sequel to follow??
BTW, it seems like a real life thingie to me:) Nice...
Nilay is a nice name..If I get a boy child, am going to name him Neel:)
Vi..where is your story wala post?delete kyun keeya??
Jeenu - One of my cousin's name is Nilay. Sounds like a reel life story to me :) Accha hai...i hope there's a part deux.
ROS - You want to name him Niel..zara hatke :)
Best wishes for ur bday first :)
A story from Jeenu? wow! Am I your inspiration too? (wink!) :)))
thanks for not making any attempts to write in queen's angreji or bushland angreji. Indian angreji is just pine and I love it.
Looks like a first episode of a thriller, are there any murders ?
Pretty fast paced, you'll have cyber bricks landing at your place if you keep your junta waiting.
Very sweet write-up Jeenu.
The narration is effortless.
Thanks for calling me expert story writer!!!
Heh! I'm no expert .. just wannabe expert :D
We are all trying n no1 is failing :)
Yes yes .. write a sequel . it ended way too soon :(
yes ppl there is a sequel to follow...thanks for be so kind and writing all nice things about it :)
Hey ROS
it is inspired by something that happened to a gal very close to me..but i have taken some liberty to change stuff here and there :)
so u want a son..huh???
if i had girl i will call her varshini and a boy i will call him kaushik:D
hey Bhole
well see it is a common name "nilay" :D
Hey priya
ofcourse iam inspired every blogger i have read..i just dont know how good they are..u are also my inspiration :D
thanks for your b'day wishes
hey aria
thanks for the encouragement.
hey rauf
welcome to jeenu's spot..i dont know any other angerezi..well i will def try to post stuff as soon as i can..
cheers
jeenu
Varshini..Wow:)
My baby girl will be called "Diya"
Gosh! we already started planning for babies:)) bany ka papa tp dhonndte hain pehle:))
flash news:
Jus heard..
walmart is selling papas made frm china..
3 for $10
anyone interested?
I knw just 2 here...but maybe u cud keep one as a spare :P
Gi!
We dont want cheap papas:))
LOL Rosie and Jeenu!
Hey, it helps to have it all charted out! and ROFL@pehle baap tu dhoond ley...are chinta kis baat ki hai...vo bhi mil hii jangey!
Nice names girls...
vi
P.S.
Ros, as to why i deleted it, thanks to Nandu's insight-it sounded redundant!
hey Vi
u deleted wat???
well haan ROS problem is there only yaar..i have rest of the course charted..just need to find the right kind of guy
Gi def no to chinkis yaar.:))
cheers
jeenu
Vi,
I don't think Nandu or anyone should influence what you write.
If that sounded redundant, thats not your problem, hai na??
Sorry Nandu, nothing against you but even if someone else would have said that, I would still have felt the same. Dont take it personally:)
Get it back, girl:)
Jeenu,
We are talking about "Lipstick Fiasco" here.
arre Jeens...itz jus Made in china as all walmart products are:-)
was just taking a stab @ walmart as I was doing to ROS and U ;-)
Hi Ros,
Well, nandu was right, it was kind of redundant...so accepted and tried to write something hatke :)
And its not just nandu (again sorry nandu nothing personal) I would have changed it irrespective of who gave the constructive criticism/suggestions. Aap ka koi suggestion hu tu zaror bataiye :)
BTW, appreciate your thought :)
vi
Vi,
CLOTHES:) Man..I love talking about em;)
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